Monday, June 16, 2014

GLOOM

Olden wordsmiths surely got it right,
one syllable to express the pain,
foggy heaviness clenching lungs,
razor-sharp edge gutting cleanly,
spear point piercing leaden heart,
weary shoulders, arms drooping
and all because of sudden rejection.

2 comments:

  1. Amazing what rejection can do to a person. You've expressed it well.

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    1. My stuff is not as steamy as yours. :)

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